Julia:
Argument: against horoscope/astrology/disproven by science.
Strength: good contrast, very informative/evidence, appealing layout that fits the theme
Development: it is a lot of block text, maybe add some images to break that up?
Meredith:
Argument: photo manipulation is often unnecessary?
Strength: interesting! very relevant to society today
Development: text, talk about the effects and the powerfulness of the program (photoshop)
Olivia:
Argument: you are encouraged to travel, each state has something different to offer
Strength: quality images, color contrasts, cool layout
Development: title, some images have text and some don't (happy medium?)
Kim:
Argument: buy local, homemade and handmade
Strength: nice flow, easily understood headings (don't need to unpack a lot of information)
Development: watch the white space
Courtney:
Argument: that you should participate in National Novel Writing Month
Strength: cool color and layout, good use of white space!
Development: all text, maybe add an image somewhere? (plain novel image, book, pages, etc.)
Devon:
Argument: cost of a meal plan/food at Tech
Strength: tumblr blog will reach the intended audience well
Development: create some subheadings under each post (ie: cost, options, etc.), your images also need some more explanation
Hannah:
Argument:
Strength: color is calming, layout is intriguing
Development: the white on green heading is a bit dizzying
Jane:
Argument: we need to use our technology and skills and put them to good use (or better use than what we are already)
Strength: color contrast, good recognizable images
Development: get the music to work :) and watch the speed of the text, add a few more images?
Jana:
Argument: Halonen Landscaping is the premier lawn and garden care
Strength: clear argument, black white and green contrast well, pop of color is good, adds interest
Development: shadow on the secondary text, name to contact?
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