Major argument: more students should join Vocal Achord, singing group on campus.
Strength: great simple display, very structured and clean. Can't wait to see color!
To work on: although it does have a fun feel, do the letters of Achord need to be titled in the first logo? Maybe you've already explored that and like the tilted look better. :)
Cassandra:
Major argument: Greek Life is a good opportunity to take a leadership role. It's not all about socializing.
Strengths: nice flow, like the headings and title is great!
Work to do: provide more examples, slow the prezi down so readers can stay on slide and finish reading. :)
James:
Major argument: there are consequences to online piracy (specifically music piracy)
Major argument: there are consequences to online piracy (specifically music piracy)
Strength: awesome color contrast! Visuals are also very relevant to your argument.
To work on: fill the white space at the bottom with something (you plan to). Also state your argument more clearly. Citing your sources is also a good idea to add credibility.
Charlie:
Major argument: more college students should join the club for various reasons
Strength: appropriate information grouped together well, displayed in the right order
To work on: do you plan on using some music or something in the background? More visual interest as well (add the photos)
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